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Her words
stopped
before they could reach the floor
Halted by the gentle flow of comfort
from his lips
His hands
pressedagainstherheart
As if,
he wanted to hold her
forever
inside his truth
Between the sleepless nights
and oblivious mornings,
she slipped into chaos,
tears threatened to leak
from her bruised heart
"Tell me everything that I want to hear."
And she cries.
She cries.
The words fell apart at the base of her chin,
like the separation of a mother and her children,
harsh, rough, and jaded remorse
Her eyes flash with color
as memories flow between the
hitched breaths
caught behind her broken lips
"Is this all we get to be absolute?"
Hands,
floated between the barriers of skin and emotion,
passing through the shields she
places
everything
behind
"I'm sorry."
stopped
before they could reach the floor
Halted by the gentle flow of comfort
from his lips
His hands
pressedagainstherheart
As if,
he wanted to hold her
forever
inside his truth
Between the sleepless nights
and oblivious mornings,
she slipped into chaos,
tears threatened to leak
from her bruised heart
"Tell me everything that I want to hear."
And she cries.
She cries.
The words fell apart at the base of her chin,
like the separation of a mother and her children,
harsh, rough, and jaded remorse
Her eyes flash with color
as memories flow between the
hitched breaths
caught behind her broken lips
"Is this all we get to be absolute?"
Hands,
floated between the barriers of skin and emotion,
passing through the shields she
places
everything
behind
"I'm sorry."
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Q: How well does the formatting emphasize main points in the second half of the poem?
Q: How well does the formatting emphasize main points in the second half of the poem?
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I loved the formatting, dear. I always do and it always makes it so much more interesting. <3