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April 25, 2013
Dreamers by ~Kupo9089 illustrates perfectly how writing can transcend into a complex relationship between two souls, explains the suggester.
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Suggested by AdmiralSilv
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She reminds me that she's a dreamer

Her right hand delicately grips a pencil
as she's working equations on a TI-89 with her left
She looks up at me and smiles,
and there are stars, meteors,
spanning across the cosmos of her expression

her countenance reminds me to look up at the chalkboard
that's attempting to teach me how
to make verses sing from pages in a plain 8 by 11 notebook
and I am only armed with
a .7 pencil and a purple pen,
stolen from my older sister's pencil pouch

My hands are inches away from hers
from the desks side by side
like cars parallel parked on a side road
her equations confuse me

until she flips the page
and shows me stories
filled with metaphors of the sky
reminding me that we are both here for the same thing:
Writing.

I needed a reason to smile
She wanted a lesson in writing

She reminds me that I'm a dreamer

We exchange stories and poems like cigarettes
except the only price we pay is a small portion of our ego
when there are mistakes and flaws,
and we are graciously fragile people

I wrote poems of a boy whose touch I could never forget,
where I only slept because he promised me sweet dreams and good mornings  
Her stories were spun from meteors, magic spells,
and a payment of cucumbers

She teaches me that writing is a two-way street.

You walk down the road, expecting a revelation in the end,
but you don't find one
Instead, your find yourself armed with a notebook, a couple pencils
and blank pages  

She taught me to write my own endings with periods
so I sound like I can stand tall and proud,
not second guessing myself with an ellipsis at the end of my statements

I know that comma splices aren't the only thing that can cut sentences in two

She taught me that writing means to breathe
and the breath given to works of art comes back
in the form of satisfaction when you lay your pencil down  

You form callouses on your hands to take away those that are on your heart
You question how paper so thin can harbor so much weight
when all that's on them are words you're too afraid to speak
and remind yourself that you're a dreamer

I needed a reason to write.
She gave me one.

Thank you.
For a contest.
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Edit:
Holy shit. Best thing to wake up to is a bunch of favorites. Jesus.
Thank you everyone! Thank you, ~AdmiralSilv and ^NicSwaner! This means so much to me!
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This has been featured in my journal! I hope you like it! <333

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